this is an accessible project. task 1 was explained. whether the observations are accurate or not is immaterial. they are the authors observations. clearly a careful and vigilant distinction was made in dissecting the 2 films and some acute, honest impressions were made. the only lacking component here were the graphics which were plentiful in task 2. the author emphasized task 2 and made it their own. it seems they had fun yet still still managed to communicate and highlight the essence of the task in a playful and fun way. nice touch on the urban story. it is refreshing to have a personal opinion thrown in there for personality’s sake. beautiful drawings and collage make it a fun to crit project. the only criticism was that some of the black and white pictures were a little too dark. but all the key components were evident such as time, direction, typology, views et al. a descriptive + analytical work. a very good project. well done.