as much as it was interesting to have a positive + negative display of the format, task 1 was a no show. the a3 sheet of task 2 is crisp and the layout is clear. the route would have benefitted more from a narrative. for instance, why were kloofendal, sophiatown and auckland park highlighted? what about roodekrans, noordekrans or cottlesloe? journey would have been enhanced with more images. nice touch with the emotional mapping, but more emotions could have been unpacked, such as joy, surprise and anticipation, for example. a legend of the congestion would have been beneficial. good work with latent potential. open up!