13.2.11
task 1’s matrix is enticing. the movement from horizontal ground to verticality as depicted by the redline works well in unpacking the films. just as the private | public thing. unfortunately the analyzing discontinues there. the themes mildly explored should have been taken further and a more critical assessment of the 2 films would have supported the project to reach a higher plenitude rather than a mundane one. another short trip from auckland park to fada whereby people, trees + buildings were mapped. why stop there? if one does stop there, then a more interrogative rendering should have been employed. the trip is short, the mapping could have been intense. the beginnings of beautiful work, but more intensity is required and you have to push yourself to go beyond the mediocre. satisfactory work.