an interesting page and layout but somewhat thin on context and information. there are some astute and acute observations in task 1, especially the horizontal vs the vertical plane and the idea that each window becomes a city in itself. this concept could have been pushed further, just as the concept of apartments appearing as mini cbd’s. the drawings need an explanation to oriented the viewer just as the aerial in tasks 2 needs points of interest along the route. clearly the author travels quite a distance from bed to class. this is substance for a rich narrative as they traverse the city in a south to north direction. a lost opportunity. satisfactory work.