the sheet was entirely made up of task 2 and it was well executed. fresh to see text become a traversing line with red points of interest. a legend is required to access the points making them legible. images do not require to be that size. by making them smaller to give more ‘room’ + ‘space’ to otherness, for example a narrative. issues of section + elevation were ignored. it is difficult to decipher exactly what are the parallels of interaction through public engagement vs personal space in a combined whole. as much as interesting the photographic journey is, the pictures are too similar, except the clips from the films. task 1 was absent. satisfactory composition.