the format of the page is very beautiful. the combination of the film stills (once you remove the transparent illustrated page), photographic journey and contextual aerial map are the beginnings of a compelling narrative. the section running at the bottom of the page further intensifies the latent drama. but alas, just as it takes off, the narrative crashes. the transparent layer begins to resuscitate the story but also ends. was this because of not enough time? not understanding where to go? what? the text on his page demonstrates that the author had a semblance of comprehension of the task. the line the films reveal people as they go about their everyday lives in the city. they showcase a variety of textures that we often overlook confirms that the author understands the task. issues of space, time, distance et al should have been explored on the 2nd sheet of paper, telling us a coherent story. the beginnings of good work.